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Shoba Srinivasan comments :
hmmm...nice!
    

Preeti Dharia comments :
I enjoyed your story. Very well written.
    

Bheegi Palke comments :
nicee...
    

Sindhu Sharma comments :
Hi,
This is a very well written poem. Makes me feel really proud of Bapi.Why can't men in general be like Bapi in particular?

Regards
Sindhu
    

Uma Asopa comments :
Hi Kanchana....very touching story..liked it though the situation may not be so realistic but well it is never too to be on right path..
    

Swagata Banerje Bhattacharya comments :
I think your story was very well-written. I liked the contrast of the excitement of everyone outside and the girls anxieties within.Potrayal of the father's character is vivid in so few words! Thats an achievement! Keep it up!
    

Misha B comments :
Hi! this captures the anxieties of a lot of girls tying the knot ...especially if they barely know the guy."All that glitters, is not always gold."
    

Unknown comments :
Excellent I know somebody in the same situation but couldn't call off because she didn't had the inner strength. Wish all men could be like "Bapi".
    

Paromita Bose comments :
Wow, I don't think any father would be so brave. It would need a superman to do a thing like that.
    


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