"VO PAL" 1. "haathoon mai thame haath......... jo pal gujara tha humne saath......... kash vo pal wahin tham jata........... ....ke tere pehlu se uthne ko ab ji nahi chahta." 2. "kab aaya kab gay vo pal pal bhar mai gujar gaya vo pal kab lout ke aata hai guja pal khawahishoon, tamnnawoon ka pal intzaar karte hai barsoon jiska, pal mai gujar jata hai vo pal........" hello friends, bahut kuch likha chahti hoon is pal ke liye......... per shabdoon ko sanjo nahi pa rahi, ek choti si koshi ki hai, aap sab ka sehyoog mile to bahut kuch keh dega ye pal.......... welcome to add your views......... HONEY Shrikrishan Makhija comments : Honey ji, Ye pal to guzar hee jaate hain Par dil ke falak par yaadon ke kuchh zakhmon ko chhoD jaate hain. Sujit Kumar Das comments : Kuchh pal jo maine sirf khabo mein hi jiye,Per wo jo bhi tha achha tha. Wo pal kuchh aisa tha:- Kaise bhool jaaye wo pal,rah-rah ke yaad aaye, Kabhi tujhko,kabhi mujhko rula jaaye..... Jab chale the sath-sath saahil pe hum dono Aur Geelee rait per likha tha jab naam tera... LahroN ki tarah mann mein aaye jayeele Kabhi tujhko,kabhi mujhko rula jaaye..... Kaise bhool jaaye wo pal,rah-rah ke yaad aaye, Kabhi tujhko,kabhi mujhko rula jaaye.....